Writing EOI C1, 2

Duración: 120 minutos.

Hi Mary

Thanks so much for your post.  Just thought I'd drop you a line in response to your opinion about lessening the consumption of meat. I came up with a few ideas about why we should reduce meat consumption.

Regarding the sustainability of meat intake, I'd highly recommend reducing it because we would slow down climate change and deforestation. I think the production of meat causes a detrimental effect on the planet because a huge quantity of water is needed to grow grain to feed animals. In contrast, much lower quantities of water are needed to sustain a vegan diet.

What about taking care of our health? world citizens must eliminate meat one day a week instead of consuming it daily. Aside from that, we not only reduce the risk of dying from a heart attack as well as some cancers, but also, animals have the right to live and have freedom.

Governments should enforce meat consumption laws to support local food and animal rights. Currently, the traditional pastoral setup of cows and chickens freely roaming the land has been replaced by environmentally unsustainable factory farms.

Anyway, I hope I was of some help.

Miriam 

1. Introduction

This proposal aims to draw attention to several issues regarding the town's redevelopment. I am writing on behalf of the rest of neighbours who were asked about their preferences. In addition, it outlines not only the benefits of some facilities but also neighbors´ awareness of the different proposals. It then concludes by offering the best alternative. 

2. Current suggestions with town redeveloped

Although this lockdown situation has reduced the tourism rate, surveys have shown that few residents are happy with the building of a hotel and conference center, finding this service unsuitable in this day and age. 

Presently, the majority of students have expressed their frustration about not finding a spare time center, as a result, health problems, as well as technological addiction, are what teenagers have been experiencing but under no circumstances should the council invest money on that since we have plenty of outdoor spaces to do sport. 

3. Recommendation for building a supermarket and new homes

It is suggested that the council urgently undertake the following measures:

• First of all, a multi-story building should be introduced so that it allows neighbors to buy everything in one place instead of commuting everywhere. 

• Secondly, I believe an answer to families´ awareness could be providing a car park.

• Last but not least, I would strongly recommend building new homes for families who were laid off from work to change the living conditions of deprived people. 

• Finally, the town council should consider keeping in touch with less affluent areas in our town to tackle their needs. 

4. Conclusion

To summarise, following the proposals described, local people's lives will have made a positive change by next year. 

1. Introduction

This proposal aims to draw attention to several issues regarding the town's redevelopment. I am writing on behalf of the rest of neighbours who were asked about their preferences. In addition, it outlines not only the benefits of some facilities but also neighbors´ awareness of the different proposals. It then concludes by offering the best alternative. 

2. Current suggestions with town redeveloped

Although this lockdown situation has reduced the tourism rate, surveys have shown that few residents are happy with the building of a hotel and conference center, finding this service unsuitable in this day and age. 

Presently, the majority of students have expressed their frustration about not finding a spare time center, as a result, health problems, as well as technological addiction, are what teenagers have been experiencing but under no circumstances should the council invest money on that since we have plenty of outdoor spaces to do sport. 

3. Recommendation for building a supermarket and new homes

It is suggested that the council urgently undertake the following measures:

• First of all, a multi-story building should be introduced so that it allows neighbors to buy everything in one place instead of commuting everywhere. 

• Secondly, I believe an answer to families´ awareness could be providing a car park.

• Last but not least, I would strongly recommend building new homes for families who were laid off from work to change the living conditions of deprived people. 

• Finally, the town council should consider keeping in touch with less affluent areas in our town to tackle their needs. 

4. Conclusion

To summarise, following the proposals described, local people's lives will have made a positive change by next year.